Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Rank 3 essay from the reader

I read Actions Speak Louder Than Words, The Infamous Mr. Darcy, and Faulty First impressions.  The best of these essays, even though still not amazing, was The Infamous Mr. Darcy.  I believe this because Actions speak louder than words used way too many quotes and did not analyze the text enough.  Moreover, Faulty impressions is an essay that lacks depth and analysis, and, often relies on quotes to substantiate for analysis.  Next, this essay also uses very basic language and does not use creativity or complexity in the essay.  Lastly, i feel that while the Infamous Mr. Darcy essay seems to be very elequently worded and verbose, behind all the big words, there actually is a meaning.  With that said, while this essay still isn't an amazing essay, it still has a meaning and sounds and reads very well, and also has a strong argument.  So, out of the three essays that i read, The Infamous Mr. Darcy essay was the best.

1 comment:

  1. Ryan, not the highest of praise. Like when Lydia says there were uglier hats in the shop.

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